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Atlantis

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November 7, 2014
Atlantis by katiekerr says everything it could possibly say in as few words as could possibly be used; we can ask for no more from a poet than this
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Sometimes I think Atlantis was

Nothing but a sandcastle
Built below the tide line,
And maybe so were we.
I sat on this for months, worried that it was a much larger poem just waiting to grow; but returning to it with fresh eyes, I realised that it's basically perfect.
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